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My adviser, Dr. Andrew Williamson, and I have discussed how my skills might fit in with the planning you will be doing for your next conference in November of 2010. He said he had discussed with you the possibility that I could assist you in the conference's preparation.
Dear Mr. Partridge: Referrals and self-referrals based on informational interviews:
I'm sure you remember my conducting an informational interview with you last November. The insight you provided into fashion merchandising was invaluable to me, and I thank you again for giving so generously of your time and information. I'm now closer to graduation and would like to meet with you again to discuss the possibility of my joining your firm.
Dear Mr. Alberts:
Dear Ms. Kervin:
Dear Ms. Yeargin: Referral based on networking at a professional meeting:
Your colleague, Nikki Voorman, and I met a few days ago at the Big Bend Advertising Federation meeting. She informed me that you are interested in hiring a motivated individual who can sell your new line of jet-propulsion watercraft. I have the background and personality to excel in this capacity. Self-referrals based on internships and summer jobs:
Thank you for the opportunity to work for you this past summer. Working with the kids was a very valuable experience. And next year will be even better. I am aware that the position will become available again at the end of 2010.
Dear Ms. Ashlyn: Self-referral based on meeting at a career fair:
It was a pleasure speaking with you last week at Whitworth University's annual career fair. I was particularly impressed by Atlantica's philosophy and hope that you will consider my resume in your search for new consultants. Self-referral and referral in opener:
I enjoyed meeting with you at Kriner Pontiac-Buick-GMC Truck in Poughkeepsie last summer. Bill Howard, fleet manager at Kriner, suggested I contact you regarding possible openings in the financial management department of the Fleet Division.
Dear Mr. Bowman: Self-referral based on social encounter (Be sure it's appropriate to refer to recipient by first name):
Once again, I must thank you for the interesting conversation we had at Christie's and Ken's wedding last week. I appreciated the information you gave me on the airline industry and the insights you provided about the company's work environment. I am writing in response to your invitation to share my resume with your company. Self-referral with flattery added:
Thank you for the opportunity to have lunch with you during your visit to Azusa Pacific University. I also attended your seminar here regarding Wal-Mart and found it interesting and informative. I understand from our lunch that you are hiring college graduates in your marketing department.
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