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Don't bend too far in the positive-attitude direction by using language that is so lofty that it comes off sounding almost phony, as in this example:
I am writing in response to the employment advertisement of juvenile care worker as listed in The County Leader. I share a deep concern and commitment to humanity, especially our children. After reviewing the enclosed resume, you will be convinced that interviewing me will be mutually beneficial. I am anxiously awaiting the opportunity to fulfill my responsibility to all humankind.
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