More attention-grabbing openings.
Dear Mr. Cutts:
Having been employed with Hawaiian Tropic previously, I know firsthand that your
corporation is a strong and growing organization in which I could meaningfully
contribute the management and marketing experience I've gained through both
education and experience.
Dear Mrs. Thomason:
Perhaps you should not consider me for an internship unless you want an energetic,
dynamic, and dedicated individual. In a fast-paced and growing world, it is
important to be flexible, open-minded, and prepared for change. In addition to
possessing these attributes, I am confident that I could make a valuable
contribution, using information technology and management training garnered through
both education and experience.
Dear Ms. Ashlin:
After reading your advertisement in the newspaper, I knew I had to contact you
immediately. As requested in your ad, I am a highly motivated person who works
hard to accomplish my vision for the future. The success of your company fits
perfectly within my vision, and I firmly believe I possess the tools to help
your company thrive.
Dear Mr. Koppel:
As a seasoned cruise traveler and worker in the hospitality industry, I am well
aware of your company's outstanding status as an industry leader. My education and
experience in marketing, customer service, sales, information systems, Spanish
language, and worldwide travel would enable me to enhance the success of Royal
Caribbean Cruise Lines.
Dear Ms. Patria:
I was excited to see the position of marketing coordinator for Mamma Mia's Pizza
in Sunday's Star Ledger. I am currently a delivery person for your Glen Ridge
location and am very impressed with your company's values, philosophies, and of
course . . . your pizza! My past work experience, education, and knowledge of
the company would enable me to contribute to the success of Mamma Mia's Pizza.
Dear Ms. Hinkle:
What person interested in working in the rental car business wouldn't want to bring
motivation and talent to the industry leader? I am extremely interested in working
in this industry, and that's why I'm applying for the manager trainee position.
Dear Mr. Brookfield:
Over the last four years, I have been an avid consumer of your company's
automobiles. I have a passion for what your company produces, and I know I can
infuse this same energy in all the work I do for you. I have a solid educational
background, as well as extensive experience in a number of related fields, and I
would be thrilled to contribute my talents to your organization.
Dear Mr. Hagman,
I would like to become an asset to your management staff as a general office
manager. I am convinced that O'Dell & Lee, Inc., will benefit from my training as
a management major at Arizona State University and my prior experience at your
office.
Dear Ms. Hudnut:
The knowledge and experience I have obtained throughout my four years of college
education and work experience make me an exceptional candidate for the sales manager
position you have advertised in the Wall Street Journal.
Since one of the main purposes of your letter is to get you an interview, a
particularly arresting opener for a cover letter is one that asks for an interview
right off the bat. Note the confident tone of this opener: