by Katharine Hansen, Ph.D.
One of the challenges of getting an employer to pay attention to your
cover letter is that letters tend to look uninviting, with large
expanses of gray type, broken up only by paragraphs.
One solution, of course, is to make your letter as concise as
possible so that it doesn't look like a daunting reading project. Be
as brief as you can, and make sure your letter has a pleasing amount
of white space. Keep your paragraphs short, and include no more than
4-5 paragraphs. Cover letters sent electronically in the body of an
e-mail message should be especially brief. (See our article,
Tips for
a Dynamic Email Cover Letter).
You can also use special formats to make your letter more reader-friendly and
enticing. These formats also call attention to your qualifications
and enable you to tailor them very sharply to the requirements of the
position you're applying for. This article describes four such
formats:
Bullets. Bullet points can break up the text of your cover
letter and draw the reader's eye to your most compelling selling
points. Be sure you don't re-hash your resume's bullet points. And
unlike bullet points on a resume, those on a cover letter should
either be in complete sentences (instead of clipped, "telegraphed"
resume language) or should complete the sentence that leads into the
bulleted list.
See an example of a
bulleted
cover-letter section and a
full
cover letter with bullet points.
Word bullets. Word bullets (which can be used with regular
bullets), also break up the text and are excellent for spotlighting
words or phrases from the ad or job posting you're responding to. By
pulling these words out of the ad, you can focus your letter sharply
on how you meet the requirements that relate to those words.
See an example of a
letter that uses word bullets.
The Two-Column Letter. A particularly effective way to deploy
the specifics of an ad or job posting to your advantage is to use a
two-column format (also known as a "T-formation" letter) in which you
quote in the left-hand column specific qualifications that come right
from the employer's want ad and in the right-hand column, your
attributes that meet those qualifications. The two-column format is
extremely effective when you possess all the qualifications for a
job, but it can even sell you when you lack one or more
qualification. The format so clearly demonstrates that you are
qualified in so many areas that the employer may be willing to
overlook the areas in which your exact qualifications are deficient.
One of my former students describes her success in using the
two-column format: "Several months ago, you referred me to your Web
site where there was a sample of a cover letter using a 'you
require/I offer' table format. Believe it or not, I sent in my resume
along with a cover letter in this format to a job that was posted on
Monster.com, and I actually got an interview!! The position is with
[name of company], and I can't even imagine how many applicants they
had. When I went in for the interview, the person that I met with
complimented me on the cover letter and actually said that that's
what got me in the door ahead of so many others!"
You can see three sample letters in a two-column format:
Sample 1,
Sample 2, and
Sample 3.
Postscript. Adding a PS to your cover letter -- especially one
that's handwritten -- is another great way to grab the employer's
attention. Ideally, your postscript should encapsulate your
Unique
Selling Proposition -- the one quality that you feel will inspire
employers to hire you above all other candidates.
See examples of cover-letter postscripts.
Why not try one of more of these cover-letter formats today to see
they improve your response from employers?
Questions about some of the terminology used in this article? Get more information (definitions and links) on key college, career, and job-search
terms by going to our Job-Seeker's Glossary of Job-Hunting Terms.
Katharine Hansen, Ph.D., creative director and associate
publisher of Quintessential Careers, is an educator, author,
and blogger who provides content for Quintessential Careers,
edits QuintZine,
an electronic newsletter for jobseekers, and blogs about storytelling
in the job search at A Storied
Career. Katharine, who earned her PhD in organizational behavior
from Union Institute & University, Cincinnati, OH, is author of Dynamic
Cover Letters for New Graduates and A Foot in the Door: Networking
Your Way into the Hidden Job Market (both published by Ten Speed Press),
as well as Top Notch Executive Resumes (Career Press); and with
Randall S. Hansen, Ph.D., Dynamic Cover Letters, Write Your
Way to a Higher GPA (Ten Speed), and The Complete Idiot's Guide
to Study Skills (Alpha). Visit her
personal Website
or reach her by e-mail at
kathy(at)quintcareers.com.
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